The time has come! As promised, today I’m asking you to share your experiences of heart disease through the fun (if slightly random) format of haiku!
Quick reminder… A haiku has 17 syllables in all: 5 in the first line, 7 in the second, 5 in the third. For our purposes, that’s really all you need to know – just don’t tell the haiku police I said so!
This week’s theme is MEDICATION – something I’m sure most heart patients have some experience of.
How do you feel about taking medication? How often do you take it? Do you suffer (or enjoy?!) any side-effects? Are you a fan of the weekly organiser or do you pop your pills freestyle? Do you worry about the environmental impact of all those blister packs? Is your local pharmacist your new best friend? Anything you’ve ever thought about your heart medication, I want to hear it!
Below are a selection of medication-inspired haiku I’ve written lately. Hopefully they’ll get your creative juices flowing…and reassure you that what I’m seeking is conversation, not necessarily a masterpiece!
Feel like a granny
When I fill my tablet box –
Functional, not fun.
Heart meds? If only!
They detour round my body,
Affect everything.
Permanent tiredness
Is medication’s side-effect.
Is it bedtime yet?
Water tablet day –
I pee, piss, slash, urinate,
Then I pee some more.
Beta-blockers cause
never-ending grogginess.
Life goes on…and on.
Yesterday was good.
Forgot to take my tablets,
That’s why. Short-term gains.
Relentless repeat.
Days end and begin and end
And begin again.
I’m a pill-popper!
I mean the organised kind,
Not the exciting.
Appearances matter –
Rainbow dispenser cheers up
Pills in shades of beige.
OK, so now it’s your turn… Please (please!) share your thoughts with me and with other blog readers in the comments below. And if you’re more positive about your medication than I appear to be about mine, please feel free to represent that side of things! I’m so looking forward to hearing your thoughts about medication and to getting a conversation going about what it’s like to live with chronic heart disease. And check back soon for another haiku topic 🙂
They pop one by one
Tablet, capsule, small white pill
The beat of my life
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Pills are insurance
A little reassurance.
Letting me be me.
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Morning noon and night
Meds necessary evil
Keeping me ticking
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NHS breakfast.
That is what I call my meds.
They go inside my head.
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Oops, I failed.
I’ll go again…….
NHS breakfast.
That is what I call my meds.
They go in my head.
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I can’t believe how many times I’ve counted and recounted haiku syllables, only to share online and immediately realise an extra syllable has somehow made it through quality control. Glad to see I’m not the only one! And good save 🙂
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The drugs really work.
These pills keep me regular.
But not in that way.
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The alarm sounds beep
Everyone shouts pill time Mum
I keep forgetting
Why do I forget?
It’s because I can’t accept
My heart is broken
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Happy little pills
A friend for life to cheer me
I’m never lonely.
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Trust your ICD.
I did, and it has saved me.
Defibrilation.
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[…] news! The response to my request for haiku about heart medication was so unexpectedly fantastic that I’ve been able to compile a selection of the contributions […]
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Pills and infusions
more than haiku syllables
constant O2 to boot;)
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life on a tether
free to a cannula’s length
O2 left in tank
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want to disappear?
sit in a wheelchair on air
only friends see you
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